PAGE 108
PANEL 1
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - BED
Julie creeps back inside quaking with fright, drags what's left of
herself onto the bed and waits.
PANEL 2
Barney pulls a zipper on her belly down and mini vultures hop out.
JULIE (T.B..)
Now I'm in for it, those birds knocked me up too.
BARNEY
Bad pussy! I didn't say you could yiff the birds just
feed them. Get back in your tank and glue your hands
together
PANEL 3
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - TANK- AFTERNOON
He gives her a rope and big glue gun already heated up and she dives
back into the tank even though it's filled with nicklepedes, which
evaporate on contact.
PANEL 4
She sprouts extra hands so she can glue her wrists together. Then
ungrows them.
BARNEY
Now pull the rope through and toss the end out here.
PANEL 5
She does. He pulls it tight so she's on tiptoes. He shows her an
immense paddle.
PANEL 6
He climbs in behind her and proceeds to thwack her with it. Every
stroke flattens her body against the glass.
PAGE 109
PANEL 1
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - TANK- AFTERNOON
As soon as she bounces back; Whack Again.
JULIE
I hope he doesn't hurt his wrists or
arms hitting me so hard.
PANEL 2
The back of the tank is mirrored. She's hanging from the side of the
tank; her butt is 3 times normal size, red as a tomato. The rest of
her is as she describes.
JULIE
When did I acquire tiger stripes instead of ocelot
spots? Will my lord and master enjoy a tigress? One with
bunny ears and three breasts?
PANEL 3
Barney puts down the paddle, steps forward and cups all tree of her
rib balloons with his now three hands.
JULIE
(gushing)
Oh wow he does!
PANEL 4
{HERE'S WHERE THE STYLE RETURNS TO NORMAL}
INT. LOOKOUT STATION- SUNRISE
The morning sun glares in Julie's face. She squints painfully. Her
wrists red and swollen from supporting her weight all night. There's
a slight reflection from the back wall. She has two arms, two
breasts, a spotted pelt and her belly is chafed but whole and just
slightly rounded. Fearfully, she glances into the rest of the shack.
JULIE
He certainly showed how much he liked me last night. I
know it's the drugs talking, but what if he left without
using me...
PANEL 5
She perks up when she sees him at the computer typing away.
BARNEY
What do you remember about yesterday?
Be explicit.
PANEL 6
He lowers her to the tank floor. She attempts to stand but her legs
are wobbly so she sits on her bum.
JULIE
Everything Master! ---------The ice
cream; -----------the zipper;
----- ---the vultures; -------the mini
vultures; --------the paddle; ----- -
bouncy, all the wonderful sex you let
me have. Thank you LORD Van Looyna,
Master!
PAGE 110
PANEL 1
Julie acts it out and first Barney smiles then laughs.
BARNEY
After I returned from hunting, you crawled over to the
bed I put some ice cubes in your mouth; holding your
jaws wide I licked them out and put some ice cream in
there and licked that out. Then I sent you outside for a
while to warm up and when some pincher beetles started
crawling over you I called you back inside. You crawled
back in and up on my bed and I licked your belly. I hung
you up in there screwed you and cornholed you till I had
enough; hosed you down and left you to dry.
PANEL 2
He holds up a gallon jug. The blood returns to the rest of her body,
she stands .
BARNEY
This stuff is the water from that. It'll only be for
special occasions!
JULIE
Bu-uut Master. Did You have a good time? Did I please
you?
PANEL 3
Julie jumps for joy and starts dancing with excitement.
BARNEY
You were OK yesterday; but this morning was even better.
Mini vultures hopping out of your unzipped tummy?
Outstanding!"
JULIE
(sings)
"Oh Happy day."
PANEL 4
EXT. - WEEKS LATER
Weeks have passed. The furnrat high has worn off. Julie sits naked on
the porch apathetic. She's disheveled. Her hair is longer and
stringy. She has bigger bags under her eyes. She's put on weight. Her
mouth is tied shut and Barney is poking her tummy.
BARNEY
You need more exercise. You've got to lose that belly!
No fat furns! I have some equipment on its way but in
the meantime you'll run. Come on.
PANEL 5
EXT. LANDING PAD - MOMENTS LATER
A concrete block is embedded in the concrete. The immense eyebolt in
it shows wear but the shiny yellow metallic chain looks brand new.
It's 40' feet long and the hook on the far end swivels Barney hooks
Julie's anklet to the chain; walks her out to the full length backs
in to leave some slack.
PANEL 6
He then marches her around in a wide circle kicking moving or
vaporizing any obstacles to a smooth flat path. He's already prepared
a comfy chair and table on a floating pallet.
PAGE 111
PANEL 1
EXT. LANDING PAD - MOMENTS LATER
He moves the pallet into position over the block settles in with a
pitcher of ice water. As Julie starts jogging in the afternoon heat
around in circles. He holds up two hand weapons; his blaster and some
sort of air powered dart pistol.
BARNEY
Ok run! These will give you inspiration.
PANEL 2
If Julie slows down he either shoots the blaster right behind her to
speed her up or pricks her ass with a dart to punish her. Most were
soft rubber and just bruise her, but every fifth one is a pointed
blue 'bee sting. The path is soon marked with burnt streaks and
rubber plugs. Julie has at least one dart in her side,
PANEL 3
EXT. LANDING PAD - NIGHT
At sunset, Julie looking very worn out has 10 darts in her ass;
thighs and lower back. One is in her left breast. As she staggers
into her 100th lap a black dart hits her butt and her legs freeze and
she falls face down in the dirt. Slowly the paralysis invades the
rest of her body and she has a hard time breathing. Barney picks up
her limp body licks her then lets her sag to the ground.
BARNEY
One dart in the bunch is always tipped with scorpion
venom; very toxic; too bad might as well get in one last
pork.
JULIE (T.B..)
He's repeating himself. Next he'll tell me "toxic but
not lethal"
PANEL 4
EXT. - LOOKOUT STATION - WEEKS LATER - NIGHT
A somewhat thinner Julie creeps back to the shack from her latest
run.
JULIE
Two weeks same routine, sleep - bath - dance - screw -
food -then he hunts while I'm bound in some way and
usually suspended (one day he covered me from head to
foot in thick sisal ropes and only left one tit exposed
to play with) - then run and only half the time I wind
up immobile for hours. Oh he always licks while I'm hot
and sweaty, but only has sex if I'm literally
intoxicated (injected with poison)
PANEL 5
EXT. - DESSERT - DAY
Barney takes Julie with him on his hunting trips as a pack animal and
seat cushion. He fits a bridle in her mouth and makes her crawl on
all fours with water, food and extra power cells for the blaster in
saddle bags.
PANEL 6
When he takes a break she lies flat so he doesn't have to sit on hard
rocks or the dusty ground.
PAGE 112
PANEL 1
EXT. - DESSERT - DAY
She retrieves his kills and carries them back in her mouth. If she
does it well he rubs her bottom as a reward.
BARNEY
Between the exercise; packmuleing and running you're
getting svelte and toned.
JULIE (T.B..)
Kill me please. I can't take anymore.
PANEL 2
EXT. - LOOKOUT STATION - DAY
Next day she's listless and almost drowns in the bath. When he pulls
her hose away she just sucks water. He has to push the water out of
her limp form to resuscitate her.
PANEL 3
All day she goes through the motions.
BARNEY
Dance.
Julie jerks around a little.
PANEL 4
EXT. - NIGHT
Julie comes back from her evening run looking like a pin cushion with
a singed tail.
PANEL 5
INT. - NEXT DAY
Julie slumps in a corner staring off into space as Barney yells at
her.
BARNEY
You worthless hosebag; you were a convenient hole to
screw but you can't even do that right anymore!
PANEL 6
EXT. - ANOTHER DAY
Julie slumps in a corner of the porch staring off into space as
Barney yells at her.
BARNEY
Ignorant bitch can't you even moan when I hurt you?
You're a waste of space. All you could be used for was a
fuck toy now you're useless
JULIE (T.B..)
He's the master, I guess he's right.
PAGE 113
PANEL 1
INT. - NIGHT
Nine and a half weeks after his arrival, Barney sits in front of the
computer. Julie lies in the tank looking dazed.
Caption: almost 10 weeks since Barney arrived.
BARNEY (T.B..
(Reads to himself)
"Too bad the catgirl didn't work out.
I'll need a new furn soon. I'm having
you reassigned to my flagship. I need
men I can trust. More now than ever.
Grand Admiral Gunthor Muller"
PANEL 2
INT. DAY
Barney supervises as Julie dismantles the tank, bottles all his
'water' and 'milk', packs his things. He returns her glasses so she
can see what she's doing.
PANEL 3
EXT. LANDING PAD - LATER
The evac ship lands as a sand storm comes up
PANEL 4
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - AFTERNOON
The crew shelter in the lookout stations till it blows over. Two
wolves, STAN and KYLE, one maned; and a nutria with big buck teeth,
KENNY. All three watch Julie bustle about in her skimpy green bikini.
PANEL 5
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - NIGHT
Julie cooks them a great meal serves wine and chilled beer. They pet
and tease her all through dinner.
PANEL 6
The first time the wolf pats her on the ass she gives him an
apathetic look. Till she sees his broad sincere smile
JULIE
My what big teeth you have.
PAGE 114
PANEL 1
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - NIGHT
The old spring comes back into her step as she prances around serving
the meal with an ever widening grin splitting her face.
KYLE
You have nice big -- teeth too.
PANEL 2
When she finishes clearing the dishes and comes back to the main part
of the room; STAN the maned wolf sticks his nose in her butt.
STAN
You certainly are the hostess with the moist ass. Now
what can you show us?
PANEL 3
He pulls her into his lap and caresses her. Wiggling excitedly
against his crotch she croons.
JULIE
I could put on some music and get up and do a samba; ---
or we could lie down and do a horizontal mambo? What
about you guys?
KENNY
Dance for us while we digest then we'll cut cards to
see who goes first.
PANEL 4
Kyle pulls out a deck and starts shuffling.
KYLE
Yeah dance first. Screw all night. 's been a while for
us. No furn deliveries in weeks. I'm backed up!
JULIE (T.B..)
For the first time in over 2 months I'm in control.
Well, as in control as a furn/slave can be. They were on
my turf and willing to play by my rules! They like me
because I'm cute and friendly and a girl;
plain and simple. I'll put on one of Bilail's favorite
Phucking Phasers songs "Gwanna Ball All Night"
PANEL 5
She gyrates and lapdances and wraps her self in the wolf's flight
scarf and lets him hold one end while she whirls like a top, pulls
him to his feet and practically balls him standing up,
JULIE AND CD ON STEREO
"Drop ya other fucking shoe and let's
just start ta screw; Gwanna ball all
night, Till da mornin' light; Gwanna
ball all night, Make me feel alright;
Gwanna ----- ball ---all ----night!,"
PANEL 6
At same point her clothes have disappeared but her glasses are still
on. She straddles the nutria's leg and humps his kneecap in time to
the music.
PAGE 115
PANEL 1
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - NIGHT
The maned wolf she pushes down on the bed and caresses his nose with
her breasts.
PANEL 2
She ends with perfect cartwheels, all three guys were sitting there
panting and even the bucktooth rodent manages a wolf whistle.
JULIE
Gwanna ----- ball ---all ----night!
PANEL 3
All this time Barney is sitting on the computer chair watching the
others quietly. As the music ends she's draped over all three guys on
the bed. Head in the maned wolf's lap; tits between the nutria's
knees and her ass right where the big bad wolf can reach it.
JULIE
Well, Boys dig in.
PANEL 4
EXT. LOOKOUT STATION WINDOW BY BED - DARK NIGHT
The storm still rages. The lights are out and only vague silhouettes
are visible. SOUND OF ZIPPER. Shadow of Julie arching her back as a
hand caresses her spine.
JULIE
This is a good start.
PANEL 5
Shadow of Julie crawling onto Stan then sitting up silhouetted by the
window.
JULIE
Purrrrrrrrr! Keep doing that and I'll keep doing this.
STAN
Guys? Mind if I go first I'm about to blow anyway.
JULIE
There will be sever penalties for early withdrawal. Let
me show you a trick I learnt in boot camp.
PANEL 6
INT. - LATER
They storm lets up and the light reflected from the asteroids dimly
lights the shack. Julie, Stan, Kyle, and Kenny sleep curled up on the
bed in a happy heap and each guy has a part of Julie to pet and
cuddle. In the dark Kyle whispers
KYLE
You all comfortable and all. Any of us to heavy on you?
This is our first real assignment. Six months ago we
were truckers in South Parklands You're our first furn.
You ladies aren't for flight cadets. Are all of you as
nice or willing?
PAGE 116
PANEL 1
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - BED - NIGHT
Kyle gently caresses her nearest breast.
JULIE
Master Kyle. Purrrrr, that's nice - Most any girl will
treat you as nice as you treat them. Recreational Nexi
have to be willing; it's our training; but nice is
optional. Sir; you make this soldier proud to serve
PANEL 2
She gives him a long soulful kiss and freeing a hand rubs his belly
till his leg twitches. Stan and Kenny join in and they have a tickle
fest.
STAN
You've certainly perked up since this afternoon.
JULIE
Ya, this is how life should work, making people that
like you happy.
PANEL 3
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - DAY
In the morning she bustles around making pancakes and bacon and fresh
eggs and coffee. She's not wearing glasses.
JULIE (T.B..)
I won't tell them where the milk comes from! My glasses
disappeared during the night.
PANEL 4
Once everything was out on the table Stan And Kyle haul her onto the
table cover her with syrup and with Kenny lick every drop off.
PANEL 5
Barney doesn't join them at all and when they finish
BARNEY
The storm was over hours ago. You're behind schedule.
Let's go already.
PANEL 6
EXT. LANDING PAD - MOMENTS LATER
She waves as the pilots trudge back to their ship and watches as it
takes off.
PAGE 117
PANEL 1
Something crunches under her foot as she walks back to the shack. Her
glasses; Barney must have tossed them as he left and now one lens was
broken and the frame was bent.
PANEL 2
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - DAY
She manages to bend her glasses back into shape and fit the broken
lens back in. It looks bad and the broken right lens puts a strain on
her other eye. Her first night alone in the shack she catches up on
her e-mail.
JULIE
Felix's backdoor still works. I could have got back in
any time. She sees her reflection in the screen. I
wonder when that twitch in my left eye started?
PANEL 3
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - DAY
Julie cleaner and more relaxed reads her new orders off the screen.
JULIE
(reading)
1400 hours landing pad no glasses!
Report to FLT. LT. C.T.C. EQUIP 0
(to herself)
That could be very good or very bad.
Why no glasses?
PANEL 4
EXT. LANDING PAD - LATER
When the starfighter lands she is knelling at the pad and when a form
separates from the dust all she can make out are big shoes and camo
pants.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
You've lost weight reader - 4223. Are you in good
health? Here put these on
PANEL 5
His familiar voice caresses her ears and grey paws hold out clean;
new, whole glasses. She looks up into Charlie TwoCloud's coyote face.
Julie takes a chance.
JULIE
Yes...
PANEL 6
EXT. NEAR LANDING PAD - DAY
Between the lookout station and the landing pad, Julie sits cross
legged alternately reading aloud from a big book in her lap and
watching Charlie do Kata (martial art exercises) His starfighter
rests on the pad. Julie seems more relaxed but her eye twitches
occasionally.
JULIE
"....zero point oh-five milliliter Of cupid root in a
one part per thousand dilution, will stimulate various
natural steroids (as estradiol) that are formed from
androgen precursors..." Charlie continues Kata GRUNTS
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Meaning?
PAGE 118
PANEL 1
EXT. NEAR LANDING PAD - DAY
JULIE
"That are secreted chiefly by the ovaries, placenta,
adipose tissue, and testes, and that stimulating the
development of secondary sex characteristics and
promoting the growth and maintenance reproductive system
and also that mimic the physiological effect of natural
estrogens"
PANEL 2
Julie looks up as Charlie pushes air with an open palm. GRUNTS
JULIE
Estrus, in heat. As long as I'm taking furnrats I can't
stop peddling my estrous cycle...
PANEL 3
Charlie kicks the breeze. GRUNTS
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
...And the other ingredients?
JULIE
Boomberries. Natural stimulant. Now Noctoil, that's the
most insidious. Highly addictive, psychotropic and it
promotes dependence on the furr that supplies it.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
So whoever gives you the chocolate bar becomes the
most...
PANEL 4
Charlie performs a perfect spin kick, GRUNTS and sits down next to
Julie.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
...important person in your life?
PANEL 5
Julie Stands and pulls Charlie to his feet and hugs him.
JULIE
Well, it's been over a month since my last one and I'm
still glad you're here.
PANEL 6
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - NIGHT
Julie sits in Charlie's lap with her hands resting lightly on the
keyboard.
ON THE COMPUTER
WORKING PLEASE WAIT
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
...so I figured if our commander, Mikeale Leva...
JULIE
Golden jackal? Big guy. Blond crew cut?
PAGE 119
PANEL 1
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - NIGHT
Julie points at computer screen which is almost done 'working'
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Yes... If he was rescuing a Sumerian, he'd head for the
space station. Chief Rochette was back at his job, but
our former wing commander hadn't stayed around. Julie
snuggles against Charlie's chest.
JULIE
He was my first assignment here or I was his. He set
this up with the wiener dog.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
The next part is just rumor and legend...
PANEL 2
EXT. LINDARBORE PLANETOID - DAY
A camouflage-netted landing field lies between a cliff edge and a
dense redwood forest.
Mikeale and a large grizzly in jungle camo face each other at the
very edge while a motley crew of space brigands look on.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (V.O.)
One of the Lone Wolf Squadron told me that Commander
Leva asked to join the Bear Claws. They are the last
clan of pirates in the Geode system. Their leader had
other ideas. Seems Mikeale's brother Ben K. had betrayed
them...
PANEL 3
The grizzly lumbers at Mikeale who sidesteps and hits the bear in the
gut. The bear pulls out a jagged edged cutlass and swings it down at
Mikeale. Mikeale dodges left and unsheathes his survival knife which
is shorter than the cutlass but wider.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (V.O.)
Both fighters got in some good hits. They seemed evenly
matched...
PANEL 4
Mikeale is backed to the edge of the cliff. The grizzly tries for a
downstroke. Mikeale leaps sideways at the last moment and the bear
goes over the edge.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (V.O.)
The grizzly managed to snag a branch.
PANEL 5
Mikeale lowers a rope to the grizzly and at first the bear starts
climbing back up, but when he reaches firmer footing he tries to pull
Mikeale over. Mikeale releases the rope and the bear topples into the
valley far below.
PANEL 6
BREAKING BRANCHES. A THUD AS THE GRIZZLY LANDS.
Mikeale glares at the brigands.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (V.O.)
There were no challenges.
JULIE (O.S.)
Where did you get this story?
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (O.S.)
My squadmate heard it from Roger Wilmont in a bar. Seems
Doc Long was called in to try and patch up the old
grizzly...
PAGE 120
PANEL 1
EXT. LINDARBORE - DAY
A brightly colored spaceship with LONG ODDS painted on the side rests
on the landing field
PANEL 2
INT. LONG ODDS - DAY
Aboard his spaceship, DOC LONG, an okapi in scrubs, shakes his head
'no' to a group waiting outside an operating room as Roger covers the
grizzly's body on the table with a sheet
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (V.O.)
Even he couldn't do miracles.
JULIE (O.S.)
Mikeale is now the head of the Bear Claws?
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (V.O.)
Mikeale changed the group's name to The Long Raider's
and is disrupting shipping into Geode...
JULIE (O.S.)
We're in!
PANEL 3
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - LATER
Charlie sits at the kitchen table with a pile of printouts while
Julie prepares two large cups of coffee.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
(reads)
...Lone Wolf Squadron to guard jumpgate near present
orbit of Fenrus repair facility. New wing commander Ben
K. Leva. Standard troop movements...
JULIE
Ya, but read the 'sealed' orders to the new commander.
PANEL 4
Charlie shuffles some pages. Reads and looks shocked. Then reads out
loud.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
"Benjamin, we still need a war to justify our budget.
Find any reason to fire on any foreign vessel that comes
through the gate. Feel free to terminate any personnel
that balks. Have fun. Gunthor." Gunthor?
PANEL 5
Julie stumbles and a look of pain crosses her face. Some coffee
spills. Charlie looks up. She puts down the coffee cups and holds her
belly.
JULIE
Grand Admiral Gunthor Muller. Stealer of toilets seats,
kidnapper of skunks and all around lovable
pussyfarrr...t.
PANEL 6
Julie falls to the floor clutching her tummy.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Julie!
PAGE 121
PANEL 1
INT. - NIGHT
Julie sits limply by the computer sipping tea. Wires run from her
collar to the terminal. Charlie reads from the screen.
JULIE
The mint tea helps. What happened?
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
You will not die today. It is only withdrawal cramps.
PANEL 2
Charlie disconnects the wires from her collar and scratches her
behind one ear. Julie closes her eyes and smiles weakly.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
The Med Techs assume we received a counterfeit batch of
furn rations. There is much black-market demand
JULIE
This means I can't quit cold turkey. Think you can
handle more bouncy, studmuffin?
PANEL 3
Charlie opens a sealed drawer with his thumbprint. He takes out a
furnrat, cuts a small (1/8th) piece and returns the bar to the
drawer.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Dissolve this in your tea.
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