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PANEL 4
INT. COT - LATER
Julie is curled up in a ball on the bed. Charlie gently strokes her
fur.
JULIE
MMMM... feels good. Wish I did.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
You will. Just give it time. This could be an excuse to
go to Fenrus. Pick up more furn rations. I could put my
starfighter in for maintenance...
PANEL 5
Julie fidgets a little and whispers.
JULIE
Tell me one of your tribal legend stories please...
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
So, one day Coyote thinks "I need a mate." He looks in
the desert and he looks in the mountains and he looks at
the bottom of the lakes and rivers. Nowhere is the right
girl for him. Puma is too big. Weasel is too small.
Finally he goes to see the sky spirits to ask their
advice. Along the way he meets ocelot. Not to big, not
too small...
JULIE
You're making this up. Thank you...
PANEL 6
Julie finds a better position head resting on Charlie's knee.
JULIE (CONT'D)
Purrrrr....
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PANEL 1
EXT. ASTEROID BELT
A starfighter approaches threading it's way between various space
rocks. Inside Julie is visible. She sits between Charlie's legs and
the instruments. Julie's flightsuit is pink and red camo. Charlie's
is jungle camo.
PANEL 2
INT. CHARLIE'S STARFIGHTER
Julie holds the steering yoke while Charlie guides her motions.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
You learn fast. You'll be able to fly one of these
things in no time.
JULIE
I read all your books. It helps having you behind me...
PANEL 3
Julie wiggles her butt in Charlie's lap and swishes her tail in his
face.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Keep your mind on the route. There will be an empty
stretch coming up soon and we could...
JULIE
Fly united. This spacesuit is designed for furns so of
course it unzips from tail to navel...
PANEL 4
Julie unzips her flightsuit, leans forward and has her hands between
her legs.
ZIPPPPP
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Watch out for that scree!
PANEL 5
EXT. PLANETOID FENRUS SPACEDOCKS - DAY
Charlie chats with his old squadmates while Julie kneels naked on her
flightsuit by his starfighter. LOBO, a black-furred wolf and RENE, a
red fox speak while the others undress Julie with their eyes.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
So, is this Ben anything like his brother?
LOBO
Screw that bastard. He has us on 12 hour shifts up there
and a starfighter's only got 13 hours of fuel. Tell us
what it's like having spots over there whenever you
fancy? Is she a goer? Nudge, nudge.
RENE
(French accent)
Oui, would it be possible to say borrow her while you
are here?
PANEL 6
Charlie makes a subtle hand signal to Julie. She hacks and spits out
a wad of something hard and fuzzy. Lone Wolf Squadron loses interest.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Not this trip. She's been having hairball problems...
RENE
Ah, c'est tres mal. Too bad. Is it not.
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PANEL 1
Near Charlie's Ship SELMAR a female luwak (spotted civet cat) wearing
a green collar and nothing else, brings Julie a cup of coffee. Julie
and Selmar emphasize the word long in their exchange.
SELMAR
You need this, after that performance. Do you ever Long
for home?
JULIE
Ya, but it's a Long way from here.
PANEL 2
Selmar and Julie put on a show for the pilots
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and they have whispered conversation.
SELMAR
Wha'sup? You're Azreal's bud right. She's so cool with
that whole goth and accent shtick.
JULIE
It's not a put on. That's the real Azreal. Muller wants
to get a war on by accidentally on purpose killing
foreign nationals. How can we stop him?
PANEL 3
EXT. SPACE NEAR JUMPGATE 7 (FENRUS)
Lone Wolf Squadron maneuvers slowly in space till the gate comes
alive and then they form a wedge with one ship hanging back.
PANEL 4
INT. REARMOST SHIP - SIMULTANEOUS
BEN K. LEVA a thinner version of Mikeale with long dirty-blonde hair
tightly braided, talks into his communications equipment He speaks
with a heavy middle-eastern accent.
BEN
Prepare to fire on my command.
PANEL 5
EXT. SPACE NEAR JUMPGATE 7 (FENRUS)
LOBO (ON COMM)
At what target, sir?
BEN
The evil terrorist/smuggler/pirate ship that is bringing
cobalt bomb which I have been informed can split our
beloved Geode into small pebbles.
PANEL 6
A small ship resembling a cut crystal perfume bottle emerges from the
gate. All the decks are transparent.
SHIP'S CAPTAIN (ON COMM)
This is the captain of the NOSEGAY out of Nikkeldepain.
Do we need an escort? Is piracy active again?
BEN (ON COMM)
You will not be fooling us today, evil ones. Open fire.
RENE (ON COMM)
Mon capitaine? I think you have been misinformed. Anyone
can see...
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PANEL 1
A beam of light shoots out from Ben's ship and Rene's ship explodes
in a bright flash.
BEN (ON COMM)
Any more traitors in our midst? Open fire.
PANEL 2
Laser beams start to shoot out from the starfighters and abruptly
wink out.
LOBO (ON COMM)
My laser bank is offline.
OTHER VOICES (ON COMM)
Same here, sir.
SHIP'S CAPTAIN (ON COMM)
We are an unarmed trade vessel under Imperial
protection. One hyperspace message and the 3rd Imperial
fleet will be here post haste.
PANEL 3
The lead starfighter (Lobo's) faces the rear and fires through the
wedge at Ben's ship disabling his laser canon.
LOBO (O.C.)
(On comm)
Guess my laser is back on line. Captain Benjamin Kay
Leva, I'm relieving you of duty for gross negligence and
causing the death of a fellow officer.
PANEL 4
Ben's ship turns away from the gate.
LOBO (O.C.)
(On comm)
If you follow me back to base we will see what a
military tribunal has to say about your actions here
today.
PANEL 5
Ben's ship accelerates and goes to warp before anyone can follow.
LOBO (O.C.)
(On comm)
Why do they keep doing that? Every Wing commander...
PANEL 6
INT. FENRUS SPACEDOCKS HEAD ENGINEER'S OFFICE - NIGHT
In an office Charlie, Julie and Selmar drink coffee. Outside the
windows work on spaceships goes on amid sparks and loud THUDS and
CLANKS.
JULIE
(loudly)
One plan thwarted and some more spacefleet officers on
our side.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Muller will just try again. But today
went well.--
This coffee is great!
SELMAR
Old family recipe. You heading back to Kelios?
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PANEL 1
INT. FENRUS SPACEDOCKS HEAD ENGINEER'S OFFICE - NIGHT
JULIE
Ya, On the way back Charles promised to show me how to
fly by the seat of my pants.
PANEL 2
INT. GRAND ADMIRAL MULLER'S CABIN ON BOARD BATTLECRUISER -
DAY
Muller and Barney drink tea laced with milk from one of the jugs
Barney brought from Kelios.
BARNEY
Where's Tara, I look forward to seeing her. She's a well
trained slut.
MULLER
I have her showing her replacement a zorilla, around the
ship. I have made arrangements with my officers to keep
them both 'tied up' for some time, so we can talk.
PANEL 3
Muller pours some more milk in his tea.
BARNEY
...going to allow her to go home?
MULLER
She knows too much. Sumer has sent an Imperial courier
this time to bring her home.
PANEL 4
Barney drinks some more and pours some milk in his cup.
BARNEY
Interfere with a courier and Geode will be annexed and
an offworld governor appointed. Unless...
MULLER
Yes, go on please. Did you know you have lovely eyes?
How do you keep so slim?
BARNEY
Gunthor, I love the tufts on your ears and the way they
twitch when you listen hard. You're a lovely man.
PANEL 5
They both look at the milk jug, then at each other.
MULLER
The girls won't be back for hours...
PANEL 6
INT. KELIOS LOOKOUT STATION - DAY
In the kitchen area Julie eats breakfast while Charlie holds a
printout in front of her face.
JULIE
This doesn't make sense. Muller is sending a letter of
condolence to Villa Nova on the tragic death of her
sister in a terrorist bombing of an imperial courier
ship...
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
It's dated tomorrow.
JULIE
Tara hasn't even left yet. She e-mailed me last night.
Her ship leaves at noon today.
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PANEL 1
INT. KELIOS LOOKOUT STATION - DAY
Charlie and Julie look puzzled. Julie, then Charlie realize what this
means. Julie springs to her feet and pounces on the computer.
JULIE (CONT'D)
We've got to warn Tara.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Yes, but how can we do it without revealing the way we
found out?
PANEL 2
Julie thinks for a minute, makes a decision and starts typing
JULIE
By sending a message on a open channel so every furr in
the system gets it! "There's been a threat of a
terrorist bombing on the next Empire ship to leave the
system"
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
I better sign it. Furns aren't allowed that kind of
access.
PANEL 3
EXT. LOOKOUT STATION - NIGHT
Outside the lookout station, Charlie checks his flight suit. Julie,
in her briefest outfit hugs him like she never wants to let go.
JULIE
Official word is you're a hero who saved many lives...
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Unofficially I've been recalled pending an investigation
into my ties with rebel factions. How else could I get
such information?
PANEL 4
Julie and Charlie kiss like it's for the very last time.
JULIE
I could come along... Rocket trails are visible in the
sky far to the south.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
See my escort? I'll bet they have orders to terminate me
enroute.
PANEL 5
EXT. NEAR LANDING PAD - DAY
Charlie walks towards the landing pad. Julie follows.
JULIE
You're only saying that to make me stay.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
I'm saying that because it's true. Right now you belong
here, fighting the good fight. If I took you along we'd
regret it.
PANEL 6
EXT. LANDING PAD - DAY
They reach the starfighter and embrace as a dust storm kicks up
blotting out the rest of the universe.
JULIE
What about us? You're what keeps me going. Keeps me
sane.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
We both have a job to do. Where I'm going you can't
follow. What you have to do I can't be any part of, now.
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PANEL 1
EXT. NEAR LANDING PAD - DAY
Charlie starts to climb into his ship.
JULIE
I'm no good at being noble or brave but it occurs to me
that the problems of two small furrs don't amount to a
hill of fava beans and a nice Chianti in this crazy
system.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
We'll be together again. Maybe not today. Maybe not
tomorrow but someday and for the rest of our lives...
PANEL 2
Julie shouts over the noise as the engines reve up and Charlie starts
to close the canopy.
JULIE
Here's looking at you, kit.
PANELS 3-5
EXT. - SPACE NEAR KELIOS.
6 larger space ships all firing lasers and energy bursts pursue
Charlie's starfighter. Charlie avoids all of them by quick and
unpredictable turns, finally escaping though a narrow gap between
meteors.
PANEL 6
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - DAY
Julie types at the terminal singing acapella.
JULIE
"It's still the same old story A fight
for love and glory A case of do or die
The world will always welcome lovers As
time goes..."
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PANEL 1
INT. KELIOS LOOKOUT STATION - DAY
A noise outside gets her attention. Looking out the window she sees
an all black starfighter settle on the landing pad.
PANEL 2
She runs back to the computer, blanks the screen, removes her clothes
and hides her glasses.
JULIE
What now? There weren't any new orders. Better expect
the worst. Goddess I hope it's not another Barney.
PANEL 3
EXT. LANDING PAD - MOMENTS LATER
Julie kneels on the tarmac. As Ben circles menacingly, he produces a
rope with a noose and puts Julie's head through it.
PANEL 4
Ben expertly ties her paws behind her back and loops the rope around
her ankles and back up behind her. Julie's eye twitches.
BEN
You will not be running off anytime soon. I have been
sent to question you. Whether we use the noose as it was
designed will depend on your answers.
PANEL 5
INT. FENRUS SPACEDOCKS - CHIEF MECHANIC'S OFFICE- NIGHT
Dingy two room suite overlooking dockyards. Selmar and Charlie talk
quietly in the front office while SNORES emanate from the back room.
SELMAR
My boss is out of it. Word is Julie's
dire.
I know you were her lover not master.
Your catgirl may be tortured and then
offed.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Not if I can help it.
SELMAR
You got lucky dodging patrols. They've been doubled. You
can't do that again!
PANEL 6
Selmar points at a map of near space on the wall and put her finger
on Ferris. A pin is sticking out and she pricks her finger.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
I can't just forget her. She's as good as dead in Ben's
hands. You're my only hope, to get through I need a hole
in the patrols.
SELMAR
See this old iron mine on Ferris. It goes through the
whole asteroid and the ore throws off any tracking.
OUCH!
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
That might work. I thank you.
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PANEL 1
Charlie examines her hurt paw.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (CONT'D)
Want me to kiss it and make it better?
SELMAR
Yes "papa"
PANEL 2
INT. FENRUS SPACEDOCKS - CHIEF MECHANIC'S OFFICE - BACK
ROOM - SIMULTANEOUS
In the other room Selmar's master Tarue a TAYRA (eira barbara)
watches through a monitor while a speaker near the door emits SNORES.
TARUE
Headquarters will want to hear this.
PANEL 3
INT. KELIOS LOOKOUT STATION - NEXT DAY
Julie is tied nude to a chair in the center of the room. Ben is at
the computer wearing headphones.
PANEL 4
Ben moves Julie in front of the terminal and pulls a bag over her
head.
BEN
Listen to this. You will not be looking.
SELMAR (O.C.)
Lover... your cat... may be tortured and offed. Do that
again!
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (O.C.)
Forget her. She's as good as dead... You're my only ...
hole. I...want to kiss it.
SELMAR (O.C.)
Yes "papa"
PANEL 5
INT. KELIOS LOOKOUT STATION - DAY
Julie kneels on the floor. Ben holds the other end of the noose
around her neck.
BEN
Your Coyote has replaced you already. If you tell me
everything I will let you be the one to execute him.
JULIE
Master? I could never harm a master. I'm happy if he's
found another furn to serve him.
JULIE (T.B.)
Think I passed that little test. Now...
PANEL 6
BEN
AH. You think I'm a fool! Tell me who opposes Muller and
do it quick.
JULIE
Your Brother, Master Charlie... My masters always put me
outside when they contacted others.
BEN
Is that all?
JULIE
... and Tara Nova.
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PANEL 1
INT. SUMER TM - ARRIVAL GATES
The doors open and along with assorted furrs Tara, in an oversized
man-tailored shirt and still wearing a purple collar looks around.
She catches sight of Villa, Gianni and Natalie in the crowd and the
girls hug while Gianni pats Tara's head.
PANEL 2
EXT. KELIOS - DESERT - NOON
Near the lookout station Julie is staked out in the mid day sun and
Ben is turning over rocks with a crow bar.
PANEL 3
Julie fidgets trying to get comfortable and keep the sun out of her
eyes. From off screen where Ben is, the CRUNCH and RUSTLE of some
things being caught can be heard.
BEN (O.S.)
Have you remembered anymore names?
JULIE
No master. My poor little brain can't hold a lot of
stuff you know. You must be getting overheated out here.
Can I make you some lemonade? Maybe a cold beer?
PANEL 4
Ben glares at her. Julie closes her eyes to try to block out the
sun's glare and heat that's makes her head spin. A momentary odd
smile crosses her face.
PANEL 5
INT. LOOKOUT STATION - KITCHEN - JULIE'S FANTASY -- DAY
Julie pulls a glass of brackish water out of the septic tank. Drops
in ice cubes and blows her nose in it. She opens a packet of powder
and pours it in, too. A tiny mushroom cloud erupts from the glass.
Julie adds a tiny pink paper parasol and a straw.
PANEL 6 (SPLIT SCENE)
EXT. KELIOS - DESERT - JULIE'S FANTASY -- DAY
Julie hands the drink to Ben. Her face breaks out in a toothy grin as
he drinks it, (split) Ben keels over and spontaneously sprouts a
white lily from his chest.
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PANEL 1
EXT. KELIOS - DESERT - BACK TO PRESENT - DAY
Ben stands over Julie's head, blocking the sun. Julie's eyes blink
open. She seems almost surprised to see Ben standing there, then
realizes.
BEN
Do not play the mindless sexcat with me. I read your
mail to Tara and Selmar. Pilot Twoclouds's new squish
will be rounded up with him. They will probably be in
bed together when we catch them.
JULIE
Selmar knows less than I do and I know nothing.
PANEL 2
Ben probes Julies crotch with his pointy boot.
BEN
How did you know about the bomb on Tara's ship?
JULIE
I didn't Master Charlie did.
PANEL 3
Ben dumps a pail full of nicklepedes on Julie and leaves.
BEN
Stay in the sun and think about your next answers most
carefully. This may motivate you to be more
cooperative...
PANEL 4
EXT. LOOKOUT STATION - DESERT NEAR PORCH
The station door SLAMS. Bugs have attached themselves to her tits and
are crawling between her legs.
JULIE
You One-damned son of a female chicken seducer. Yowch.
I'll eat your balls for breakfast someday. Ouch damn.
Get back here now and see if I don't...
INSET
The Station door opens and Julie falls silent.
PANEL 5
It closes.
JULIE (CONT'D)
...Afraid to come out here aren't you...
PANEL 6
INT. KELIOS LOOKOUT STATION - NIGHT
In the computer hutch Julie is tied to a chair with one arm free. The
rope from the noose around her neck is slung over a roof beam but
loosely. Ben has the other end in his hand. On screen is
TYPE IN PASSWORD_____
BEN
...Go ahead.
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PANEL 1
INT. KELIOS LOOKOUT STATION - NIGHT
Julie types in
HOSEBAG
And presses enter. The screen fills with file icons.
PANEL 2
Ben pushes Julie to the side.
BEN
The files - Recipes, Dance moves, bedroom tricks... Fah!
The mails... newsletters about food, dance and erotic
massage. By the thrice damned devil bunnies, You are a
lying stinkhole.
PANEL 3
Ben pulls on the rope and Julie's head goes taut and the chair starts
to lift off the floor as she gasps for breath. She reaches up with
her free hand but Ben slaps it down and she starts to pass out.
PANEL 4
Ben calms down and lets up a little.
JULIE
Master? That made this slave all hot and wet. Did it
arouse you. Maybe I could show you what I do know...
BEN
(panting)
Aroused? The only thing that will get me warm is your
last breathe.
PANEL 5
Ben begins to pull the rope tight again and Julie starts to claw at
the bonds on her other wrist. The computer BEEPS loudly and on the
screen
INSET
COMPUTER SCREEN
ALERT! Incoming ship or ships. Presume Hostile. E. T. A. 4 Hours
ALERT!
PANEL 6
INT. KELIOS LOOKOUT STATION - NIGHT
Ben releases the rope and runs outside with a laser rifle.
BEN
Four hours...
JULIE (T.B..)
Charlie?
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PANEL 1
EXT. SPACE - FERRIS ASTEROID - MOMENTS LATER
Two starfighters with vicious rat faces painted on the front, hang in
space above the mining asteroid.
RAT IN SHIP ONE (O.C.)
(On comm)
...From Lone Wolf Squadron.
"Search and destroy with extreme prejudice"
...Orders direct from top brass.
Voice from other ship is higher and squeaky
MOUSE IN SHIP TWO(O.C.)
(On comm)
Which hole is he coming out. That rock looks like swiss
cheese...
RAT (O.C.)
(On comm)
Jarlsberg...
Hello. What's this?
PANEL 2
From deeper space a Flash Gordon style rocket, except opalescent
comes into view.
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PANEL 3
INT. SHIP LONG ODDS - CONTROL ROOM
Interior front end of ship looks like a B-52. DOC LONG (okapi) sits
at the controls and talks into his communications equipment.
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DOC LONG
(Into comm)
Enoch Long on the Long Odds here. Please identify
yourself.
MOUSE(O.C.)
(On comm excited)
It's Doc Long! The real actual...
In the flesh...
PANEL 4
RAT (O.C.)
(On comm calmer)
Long Odds, what brings you to this vicinity?
DOC LONG
(Into comm)
Outbound for Hogarth. What brings the Rodent Kupur
Squadron to Ferris?
RAT (O.C.)
(On comm)
Hunting pirates. You a Pirate?
PANEL 5
Outside The LONG ODDS window a ship leaves Ferris and zooms off.
MOUSE(O.C.)
(On comm)
It's Doc Long! Doctor, explorer, diplomat, all round
hero. Wing commander How could you...`
RAT (O.C.)
(On comm excitedly)
There. A ship just blasted out of the
mines. Bye Doc, keep your nose clean.
PANEL 6
Doc turns off the comm and turns to the pilot (O.S.).
DOC LONG
Lay in a course for Kelios. Someone is going to need
medical attention.
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