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PANEL 1
INT. STARSHIP "PUNJAB OF JAVAPORE" - CARGO DECK
Ada pulls Julie's knife out of her own back and tries to bring it
around to cut Julie but Julie just cuts Ada's wrist with a claw and
pulls the knife out of the Dhorkian's hand.
PANEL 2
After some more fighting Ada has multiple stab and scratch wounds and
Julie some bruises and a black eye. They stand apart panting.
JULIE
Give up. I'll lock you in a room, Take my friend and
leave. No harm, no Fowl.
ADA
Can't do that. Punjabi would have my ass on a platter.
PANEL 3
Ada's ax flies from Bilail's direction and hits Ada square in the
back of the head. Ada falls like a stunned ox.
BILAIL
...Need a real big Platter for that.
JULIE
Fran? You OK?
BILAIL
That's too right. Headache, bum leg, otherwise no
worries. Let's boogie. Gimme a hand.
PANEL 4
INT. LONG ODDS INFIRMARY
Azreal sits at a computer studying the graphics of the mini black
hole in the Klein bottle. Suddenly she remembers.
PANEL 5
INT. PROF. FOSTER'S REPORT - AZREAL'S MEMORY
Azreal remembers pages of the report she read in the hotel steam room
at SC. As she thinks about them the pages turn.
First page -
Swanee Technical Assessment and Research Team
Findings on the elastic nature of reality in line with quantum
physics and chaos theory
PANEL 6
Second page -
Diagrams of worm holes in the space-time continuum and equations and
formulae
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INT. PROF. FOSTER'S REPORT - AZREAL'S MEMORY
Third page
Prof. S. A. Foster, Ph.D.
My Findings.
Full page a printed text about Prof. Foster's research.
PROF. STEPHANIE FOSTER (V.O.)
...Imaging a world of evolved apes, When my assistant
Dr. Charlton Forte came in and drew my attention to
something floating over our heads.
PANEL 2
Fourth page
A photograph of Prof. Foster, Dr. Forte and to lab techs (white rats)
staring up at a small space warp showing a distant planet that looks
like Earth.
PROF. STEPHANIE FOSTER (V.O.)
Before it faded we ascertained it was indeed populated
by almost hairless and somewhat sentient apes...
PANEL 3
INT. LONG ODDS INFIRMARY - BACK TO THE PRESENT
Azreal shakes her head to clear it, stands.
AZREAL
...Got to ask Doc Long about this and maybe Sven...
PANEL 4
EXT. LINDARBORE LANDING FIELD.
Mikeale addresses a large crowd of ragtag freedom fighters on or
around very many starships in various states of repair. Julie,
Bilail, Azreal, Charlie, Sven, Selmar, Lobo, Felix, Roger, Lisa,
Kenny, Stan, and Kyle are in the crowd. Mikeale's voice booms out of
speakers set in trees and scaffolds around the crowd.
MIKEALE
(echoing)
Today day day... I I I feel eel eel like the luck luck
luckiest furr in the Geode Geode ode ode ...
PANEL 5
Mikeale switches off the mike and yells. Felix rushes up twiddles
some knobs. LOUD FEEDBACK. Fiddles some more and slinks off.
MIKEALE (CONT'D)
Would somebody please fix this damn thing.
PANEL 6
MIKEALE
One Two... OK, As I was trying to say. I feel honored
that all of you have chosen to not merely oppose Citizen
Lenny and Grand Admiral Muller, but allow me to lead
you. Doctor Enoch Long has few words then I have some
news.
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PANEL 1
Doc Long takes the stage.
DOC LONG
I've been about for some little time now.
Titters from the crowd.
DOC LONG (CONT'D)
I noticed that bad things don't leave on their own. You
got to chase them away. Sometimes you've got to be rough
about or they don't take the hint. Important thing is
don't sink to their level or you just become the next
bad thing.
PANEL 2
Doc Long leaves and Mikeale returns.
MIKEALE
Sixty percent of Geode's Starfleet are now on our side.
Open rebellion has broken out planetside...
PANEL 3
EXT. GEODE - SOUTH PARKLANDS - CIUDAD DEL LEONARDO - DAY
Thousands of rebels surround the state capital building. The building
is onion domed with minarets at the corners. A few rebels have ray
guns and laser rifles. Some have handguns and carbines. Most carry
edged weapons and farm implements. Barney and GENERAL LISSIMO (a
donkey) watch from a balcony.
BARNEY
Admiral Muller's orders, you must stop them here. If
they join with the North Parklands faction the World Gov
is no more. Total anarchy.
GENERAL LISSIMO
I was going to surrender. We have too few men left.
PANEL 4
A bullet barely misses them.
BARNEY
Lets go back inside. I brought just the thing.
PANEL 5
INT. STATE CAPITAL BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
In GENERAL LISSIMO office Barney points at two cases on the desk. The
PING of gunfire and ZAP of rays can be heard. Barney open one case
and gently removes four pressure tanks.
GENERAL LISSIMO
What have you got?
BARNEY
Isoproposymethylphosphonyl flouride. Zarin. Nerve gas.
If the winds right one of these will terminate every
living creature bug, fish, bird, plant or animal in a
half mile radius.
GENERAL LISSIMO
What about us. What about my loyal men. There's about
200.
PANEL 6
Barney opens the other case and dumps out twenty gas masks. Grabs one
for himself.
BARNEY
Give eighteen of your favorites these and write off the
rest.
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INT. STATE CAPITAL BUILDING MINARET
Sundown. Barney in one minaret with a walkie-talkie and a pressure
tank. The gas mask is around his neck ready to pull up.
BARNEY
On my command open the valves.
THREE DIFFERENT VOICES ON THE WALKIE-TALKIE
By your command, sir.
PANEL 2
Barney puts on his mask and opens the valve on his canister.
BARNEY
Now.
VOICES ON THE WALKIE-TALKIE
Si.
PANEL 3
Green smoke billows out of the minarets and blows into the capital
building.
BARNEY
Stop.
VOICES ON THE WALKIE-TALKIE
Si.
PANEL 4
Furrs run out of the building choking a fall dead in the courtyards.
Bullets splatter Barney's minaret as he ducks for cover.
VOICES ON THE WALKIE-TALKIE
You made us kill our amigos.
PANEL 5
INT. STATE CAPITAL BUILDING - MOMENTS LATER
In General Lissimo's office. The general lies slumped at his desk gas
mask in one hand, dead. Barney rushes in still masked holding his
nerve gas canister.
PANEL 6
He throws open a panel behind the generals desk revealing a
telescreen and microphone. After some adjustments Muller's face fills
the screen.
MULLER
Teach those traitors a lessen did you? Put Lissimo on.
BARNEY
Ass face is dead. The wind blew the Zarin back into the
palace. If they got on the masks there's eighteen of our
guys left. Call in an airstri...
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PANEL 1
INT. STATE CAPITAL BUILDING - GENERAL LISSIMO'S
OFFICE - DAY
A bullet shatters the screen. Barney turns to face a very angry
donkey girl in a gas mask.
DONKEY GIRL
My name is Donna Maria Lissimo. You killed my papa.
Prepare to die.
BARNEY
Stupid girl. I'll teach you manners. Might be fun. Give
me the...
PANEL 2
Two soldiers grab Barney from behind and DONNA rips off his mask.
DONKEY GIRL
We have better uses for this gas mask.
BARNEY
I'm afraid. I'm really afraid.
PANEL 3
INT. BATTLECRUISER "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" - COMMAND DECK
Grand Admiral Muller on his bridge watches the asteroids slowly move
through space. On one screen is an adult Mole lady and two mole
children in a squire room in the outer hull.
COMMUNICATIONS OFFICER
Admiral we have located the rebel base. Lindarbore.
MULLER
Alert the fleet and set a course. Engage.
PANEL 4
EXT. LINDARBORE LANDING FIELD - DAY
On the tarmac Azreal kneels comfortably under Julie's starfighter
while Julie works in the engine. Julie is only visible from the waist
down on a ladder. Azreal is holding up a spanner.
JULIE
(sings)
" Relinquish... But Don't give your butt away..."
AZREAL
Here.
PANEL 5
Julie bends down and takes the wrench. She's only wearing a camo
bikini and has oil and grease on her face and paws.
AZREAL (CONT'D)
So, you are happy now?
JULIE
Like a Dhork in a room full of ladanum. You?
PANEL 6
Julie sticks her head back in the engine. A mole in camo cargo pants
run past towards the cliff edge.
AZREAL
Mostly. I have these dreams. You remember the envelope
Charlton gave us?
SVEN (O.C.)
You Ladies ready for a break?
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EXT. LINDARBORE LANDING FIELD - DAY
PANEL 1
Sven and Charlie show up with a cooler and a duffel bag. Two armed
rebels run by after the mole.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Mikeale ordered a briefing at 1600 hours. All pilots and
senior staff. Have you eaten today?
JULIE
Got busy love.
PANEL 2
Climbs down and hugs Charlie
JULIE
Let us gather by the river. Wanna scrub me down?
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Yes Ma'am! I have something to ask
you...
PANEL 3
Charlie holds up the bag. Sven, the Cooler. SHOTS ring out from the
direction the mole ran. Everyone present turns to look.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
(distractedly)
Soap, towels and clean jumpsuits.
SVEN
Fish, fowl and cold beer.
PANEL 4
EXT. BATTLECRUISER "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" AND ARMADA - IN
SPACE ABOVE LINDARBORE PLANETOID
Muller's flagship and most of the Geode Spacefleet surround the
planetoid and slowly aim their weapons at one spot. COMM OFFICER ED
(a palomino) types, watches 3 screens (live feeds) and switches the
pictures on a giant screen for the bridge crew to watch.
MULLER (O.C.)
...Target Locked?
COMM OFFICER ED
By your Command Sir. We've lost comm with our mole.
PANEL 5
EXT. INDARBORE PLANETOID - FRESH WATER STREAM - DAY
Julie and Charlie naked in the steam up to their knees. Charlie is
scrubbing the last bits of grease off Julie's front. In a clearing
Azreal sets up a picnic while Sven talks into a wrist com.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
...So will you consent to be my mate?
JULIE
For as long as we live. Even if it's
past this week!
PANEL 6
EXT. INDARBORE PLANETOID - FRESH WATER STREAM - DAY
In a clearing Azreal, Charlie, Julie and Sven sit near the remains
of lunch. Julie looks damp but clean.
JULIE
Muller had his family living in an airlock. No location.
No wife and kids.
AZREAL
Did he...?
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PANEL 1
An earsplitting ZAP echoes, A thick ray of light lances the ground a
mile away, followed by more laser blasts, photon torpedoes, and just
plain bombs. The two couples draw their phasers and run in the
direction of the blasts.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
He did.
PANEL 2
EXT. LINDARBORE LANDING FIELD - Simultaneous
The first blast knocks a big chunk of the landing field into the
valley. Subsequent blasts tear up the field, blow up Julie's
starfighter, ignite the tents and splinter some trees.
PANEL 3
EXT. REMAINS OF LANDING FIELD - NIGHT
Azreal, Sven and Charlie pick through the wreckage while Julie pokes
through what's left of her ship.
AZREAL
No bodies or personal effects? Vaporized?
JULIE
My spotty little starship...
SVEN
There would be a trace of them left, unless...
PANEL 4
The "LONG ODDS" comes in for a soft landing in a space just barely
big enough for it on the ground. Azreal, Sven and Charlie head for
the hatch. Doc Long exits.
DOC LONG
Evening folks. Anyone hurt?
PANEL 5
Julie holds a bit of the fuselage with ocelot spots on it.
JULIE
My spotty little starship...
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
No, we're OK. Picnic in the woods when this happened.
PANEL 6
Charlie picks Julie up, throws her over his shoulder and heads for
Doc's ship. Julie reaches her arms toward the scrap that used to be
her starfighter.
JULIE
My spotty little starship...
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PANEL 1
EXT. IN SPACE ABOVE LINDARBORE PLANETOID -
BATTLECRUISER "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" - BATTLECRUISER
"UNDAUNTABLE TRAVELLER" AND ASSORTED SPACEFLEET
SHIPS.
Most of Geode spacefleet is massed in orbit around Lindarbore
PANEL 2
INT. BATTLECRUISER "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" IN SPACE ABOVE
LINDARBORE PLANETOID - BRIDGE
Muller watches a viewscreen showing the landing field or what's left
of it. The view zooms in to show Azreal, Sven and Charlie with Julie
over his shoulder entering "THE LONG ODDS"
COMM OFFICER ED
No other life signs sir.
PANEL 3
Muller dons red, segmented, heavy metal Waldos (gauntlets with wires
running into a console)
MULLER
This seems like an appropriate moment to try out the God
Mittens.
PANEL 4
EXT. IN SPACE ABOVE LINDARBORE PLANETOID
A glowing red right hand bigger than Lindarbore appears in space and
closes arround the planetoid.
MULLER
"You're one microscopic cog in my
catastrophic plans Designed and
directed by my red right hand"
PANEL 5
Just as it begins to squeeze it winks out. Hundreds of starfighters
swarm out of the Mazery and strafe the"BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" Wagner's
"Flight of the Valkyrie" plays over the ships speakers.
COMM OFFICER ED (O.C.)
We're under attack. Power's down 60%. Shields offline.
MULLER (O.C.)
Reorient weapons and begin auto target acquisition.
COMM OFFICER ED (O.C.)
Auto target acquisition, offline sir. Someone is
overriding my commands.
PANEL 6
INT. "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" - MULLER'S CABIN - SIMULTANEOUS
A zorilla (striped skunk Ictonyx striatus) in a purple bikini and a
matching collar, types on the terminal. She reads what's she's
writing aloud.
ZORILLA
...Doors To number 44 hold recoded to your signal. Guns
offline in 5 ticks. Geode Libre!
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PANEL 1
INT. "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" - BRIDGE
Muller watches his viewscreen as officers work feverishly.
COMM OFFICER ED
Guns are offline --
Reports of similar problems on other ships...
Sabotage from within suspected...
MULLER
High Commander Bjornston aboard the "Undauntable
Traveller" Fire on those vexatious gnats.
HIGH COMMANDER BJORNSTON (ON COMM)
Can't do that Gunthor. My son Sven's in one of those
ships.
PANEL 2
INT. LONG ODDS - WARD ROOM
Sven and Azreal sit by the communications setup.
SVEN
Dad? How have you been?
HIGH COMMANDER BJORNSTON (ON COMM)
Son? I understand you have a girlfriend.
AZREAL
Greetings High Commander Bjornston...
PANEL 3
INT. "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" - BRIDGE
The COMM OFFICER ED points a gun at Muller
MULLER
Excuse Me! There's a battle going on.
COMM OFFICER ED
Not any more. Give the order to stand down.
MULLER
Right away, Of course. All ship's Commander's stand by
for new orders...
PANEL 4
Muller throws the god mitten at COMM OFFICER ED, hits him squarely on
the nose and makes Ed drop the gun.
MULLER
Attack the rebels. Even Traitorous spacefleet vessels.
Take no prisoners. Scorch every inch of Lindarbore...
PANEL 5
INT. GEODE - STEENBOK CITY "PEOPLE'S PALACE"
LENNY'S BEDROOM - DAY
BunBun works at a terminal while Lenny bites his nails. Bunbun has an
eye-patch, one long ear flops lifeless down her cheek and her left
leg is in a cast.
BUNBUN
Here Master Leonard, I have the bridge of the "BATTLE OF
BACTAVIA". Looks like Master Grand Admiral is in
trouble.
PANEL 6
Lenny roughly pushes her off the chair and takes her place at the
monitor. She laboriously tries to stand.
LENNY
Wait a second. Look he's back in control. He's shouting
orders...
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BunBun wraps a weighted silk scarf around Lenny's neck and tightens
it.
BUNBUN
Too late for you, sick simpering "tyrannis"
PANEL 2
INT. LONG ODDS - WARD ROOM - SIMULTANEOUS
Charlie and Julie listen to Mikeale as Sven and Azreal have a
whispered argument in a corner. Roger and Bilail work at terminals.
Bilail has one arm in a sling. Selmar serves coffee.
MIKEALE
Twoclouds, Rayne I want you on board the "BATTLE OF
BACTAVIA" Help Ed and Muller's new furn, her name
escapes me, get the BATTLECRUISER back on line.
JULIE
I wrote the virus she used. Zelda, is that her name?
PANEL 3
MIKEALE
Bjornston, Foster I want you to find Muller, he left the
bridge when no one responded to his orders and
disappeared. Nothing has left the ship.
SVEN
Zorita. Azreal I'd rather you didn't come along. You'll
be safer here.
AZREAL
Nein. You must come back alive. I have lost so...
SELMAR
Hey Whitey. You ain't saying civets can't scrap? Or is
it girls?
PANEL 4
INT. "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" MULLER'S CABIN - LATER
AZREAL
We covered every inch of this Göttin verdammt barge. No
long eared pussy-katzen.
JULIE (ON COMM)
Take a break, we're heading for Geode. Muller's hiding
out till he can sneak off. Betcha.
PANEL 5
Azreal leans back into Sven's paws and closes her eyes.
SVEN
Here, lie on the bed a moment I see something...
PANEL 6
Azreal lies back on the bed and Sven goes over to a half open drawer.
The drawer is filled with gags, blindfolds and silken cords.
AZREAL
What did you find?
SVEN
Remember how we passed some nights on Hogarth with...
AZREAL
Me first, please. I need to let go all control.
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PANEL 1
INT. "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" - MULLER'S DOCKING BAY
Charlie talks into a wrist comm.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
... two state of the art fighters here. One black, one
red. When you can take a break pick one and we'll paint
it ocelot.
JULIE (ON COMM)
... Busy now.. Stay! Good boy. Muller might show up...
PANEL 2
INT. "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" MULLER'S CABIN - SIMULTANEOUS
Azreal in bra and panties, blindfolded, hands tied behind her back
lies on the bed while Sven tickles her feet with a feather.
AZREAL
OHHHH, Giggle, Stop. Don't. Stop. Don't stop!
SVEN
You know the 'safe word'
AZREAL
Not yet...
PANEL 3
The bed moves soundlessly away from the wall on one side and Muller
emerges holding a ray gun. Azreal and Sven don't notice at first.
MULLER
How very convenient. A ready made hostage.
PANEL 4
Sven takes the blindfold off Azreal and they face Muller.
SVEN
You can't escape. There's no way off the ship.
PANEL 5
Muller drags Azreal to him and hits Sven on the nose with the
blaster.
MULLER
Back off wolffy. We'll be going now.
PANEL 6
Sven pounces across the bed and Muller shoots him in the chest,
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Drags Azreal behind the bed and closes the secret exit.
AZREAL
SVEN!
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PANEL 1
INT. "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" - MULLER'S DOCKING BAY - MOMENTS
LATER
A seamless bulkhead opens and Muller with Azreal as a shield enters.
Charlie is taken by surprise.
MULLER
Stand at ease pilot.
PANEL 2
Charlie goes for his blaster.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Not when I can...
MULLER
I can remove her head before you aim.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
But then I can spill your guts.
PANEL 3
AZREAL
Just let him go for now. Sven's been shot. Please save
my wolf.
JULIE (ON COMM)
Charlie. There was a weapon discharge in Muller's cabin.
Watch out...
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
He's here. With Azreal. Sven's shot.
PANEL 4
While Charlie talks Muller edges towards the starfighters.
MULLER
Let me go and I'll release the girl. Deal?
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS
Deal. You have no fleet and every paw in space is raised
against you.
PANEL 5
Muller gets into one ship (black) still holding Azreal by her collar.
As the canopy closes he drags Azreal inside.
MULLER
Changed my mind.
PANEL 6
His Starfighter taxies towards the blast doors.
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PANEL 1
INT. "BATTLE OF BACTAVIA" - MULLER'S DOCKING BAY
The bay starts to decompress with a WHOOSH.
PANEL 2
Charlie dives through an airlock out of the docking bay.
PANEL 3
The outer door opens and Muller zooms off.
PANEL 4
The door closes. Vents HISS as the bay fills with air again. Julie
and Charlie enter, get in the remaining ship (red) and pursue.
PANEL 5
EXT. SPACE NEAR JUMPGATE 7 (FENRUS)
Muller's black starfighter passes through the gate.
INSET
Moments later a red starfighter follows.
PANEL 6
INT. MULLER'S BLACK STARFIGHTER
Azreal crouches behind the pilot seat as Muller maneuvers through the
jump. Her feet and hands are tied.
AZREAL (T.B..)
...Hole In his chest. I wish things were different--
Auntie's research...
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PANEL 1
EXT. DEEP SPACE - MULLER'S BLACK STARFIGHTER
They exit the jump facing a worm hole in space, Julie's red
starfighter exits and bears down on them.
MULLER (ON COMM)
Here's your fossa back.
PANEL 2
EXT. DEEP SPACE - NEAR JULIE'S RED STARFIGHTER
Azreal is ejected into space and Muller dives into the wormhole,
which closes after him.
JULIE (ON COMM)
Helmets on. Decompress. 30 seconds or she's dead...
PANEL 3
Julies opens the canopy of the starfighter and pushes off as Charlie
brings the ship under Azreal.
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PANEL 4
Julie grabs Azreal, Charlie reels them in and closes the canopy.
CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (ON COMM)
25 seconds. She OK?
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